Lucy PSA Chinese fur farms
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I don't agree with the fur industry, but what about leather. Far more animals are killed for leather coats, jackets, bags, shoes, and nobody seems to notice😬
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Lucy, I really enjoyed watching your video! I learnt lots about the fur trade. I thought that your video was very emotional and easy to understand. You used ethos, pathos and logos in a way that really made me feel bad for these animals. Your pictures were very suitable for your video as well while they were quite good quality. However, you probably should have added some emotional music that fit your video. Lastly, it might have also been better if you played that 'disturbing video' in you movie. Great job and I really like your PSA.
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Lucy, I think that your video was good and it was very persuasive, however it would have been better if put in the video clip instead of just the link and you could have added some music. You used a lot of emotive language and told us why we should not wear fur, you also gave us many solutions and ways we can help. The pictures fit very well with your topic and I like how you put in pictures of skinned animals because it will make people feel bad for the animals.
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Lucy, I liked your video and thought it was very educational. I think that it could have been better if you added music. For example, 'Say Something'. You used ethos, logos and pathos well, but pathos was used more then the others. I liked your creativity on your iMovie and your passion to this subject. You expressed your ideas clearly. I liked the pictures but you could have let certain pictures that have words on them last longer. I liked the way you worded your iMovie with emotive language. If I could make on last suggestion, I think that the link was kind of long and it might have been easier if you put the video i your iMovie or put the link in your description.
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